tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8868883626672897364.post3147583673522644407..comments2024-03-15T09:02:03.411-07:00Comments on Midlist Writer: Blurb Help Please!Sean McLachlanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09778503397743759469noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8868883626672897364.post-91439566348799107412015-12-03T09:52:10.422-08:002015-12-03T09:52:10.422-08:00I think it reads good. Maybe drop the word new in ...I think it reads good. Maybe drop the word new in the second to last line? The part about barely in the trenches two weeks implies new. Otherwise, looks great to me!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8868883626672897364.post-8973443851194066652015-12-03T07:54:53.043-08:002015-12-03T07:54:53.043-08:00Awesome blurb! I would take out the last 2 sentenc...Awesome blurb! I would take out the last 2 sentences, the bottom section. Blurbs are SO tough. I have been picking a favorite paragraph or two from the actual book. So far it is working.<br />Keep moving forward!Doreen McGettiganhttp://www.doreenmcgettigan.comnoreply@blogger.com