tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8868883626672897364.post8044157727886597395..comments2024-03-15T09:02:03.411-07:00Comments on Midlist Writer: Possible blurb for Radio Hope. What do you think?Sean McLachlanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09778503397743759469noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8868883626672897364.post-841299478596342902014-01-04T16:24:04.464-08:002014-01-04T16:24:04.464-08:00I love the first and second phrase in your blurb (...I love the first and second phrase in your blurb (yeah, I sometimes think they're harder than writing a book). The assistant mayor part seems a little awkward. But it might just be me...<br /><br />The very last part seems wordy, as well. Good luck. Maybe a trip to amazon.com would inspire you...Reading a bunch of blurbs might help you distill your novel into 100 words.<br />Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8868883626672897364.post-43104046492686485982014-01-04T14:54:57.457-08:002014-01-04T14:54:57.457-08:00I like it.
The three middle sentences I would make...I like it.<br />The three middle sentences I would make complete without the leading ... <br />Gives the final one more impact.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com