Monday, 6 January 2014

Radio Hope Blurb Version 2.0

After some input on my blogs and Goodreads, here's the latest version of my Radio Hope blurb. Thanks everyone! Input welcome!

In a world shattered by war, pollution and disease. . .
A gunslinging mother longs to find a safe refuge for her son.
A frustrated revolutionary delivers water to villagers living on a toxic waste dump.
In humanity’s last city, the assistant mayor hopes he will never have to take command.
But when a mad prophet and his army of fanatics march out of the wildlands on a crusade to purify the world through blood and fire, all three will find their lives intertwining, and changing forever.

1 comment:

Sioux said...

Sean--I lovelovelove the phrase "blood and fire." It really adds drama and danger in just a few words.

Consider changing the last part to "their lives intertwined and changed...forever."

(However, be warned. I adore ellipsis, so take my suggestion with just part of a grain of salt.)

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