Midlist Writer: Tinkering with Radio Hope's blurb (version 3.0)

Saturday, 25 January 2014

Tinkering with Radio Hope's blurb (version 3.0)

I realized that the blurb for my upcoming novel Radio Hope doesn't actually mention the radio station! So I've added a line. Tell me if you think this flows. One of the things I love about indie publishing is just a week before a book is published, you can fiddle with it.

In a world shattered by war, pollution and disease. . .

A gunslinging mother longs to find a safe refuge for her son.

A frustrated revolutionary delivers water to villagers living on a toxic waste dump.

In humanity’s last city, the assistant mayor hopes he will never have to take command.

Their only thing in common is they all listen to Radio Hope, a mysterious station that broadcasts vital information on surviving in a blighted world. But when a mad prophet and his army of fanatics march out of the wildlands on a crusade to purify the world through blood and fire, all three will find their lives intertwining, and changing forever.

4 comments:

Rusty Carl said...: I'm the worst person in the world about this sort of stuff (a glance at my own blurbs confirms this), but I think that it's fine.; 25 January 2014 at 07:36
D.G. Hudson said...: See my comment on Civil War blog. I will email you later today re the interview.

I just had a little tweak suggestion.; 25 January 2014 at 08:01
Alex J. Cavanaugh said...: You're right - it needed the radio station in it.
I think it would read smoother if it said 'The only thing...' Or maybe, 'What ties them together is Radio Hope...' Yeah, the last one has more impact with less words.; 25 January 2014 at 08:16
Sioux Roslawski said...: I like Alex's suggestion: "What ties them together..."

Good thing you caught that omission before it went out.

Good luck and congratulations.; 25 January 2014 at 15:16

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Radio Hope

In a world shattered by war, pollution and disease. . . A gunslinging mother longs to find a safe refuge for her son. A frustrated revolutionary delivers water to villagers living on a toxic waste dump. The assistant mayor of humanity's last city hopes he will never have to take command. One thing gives them the promise of a better future--Radio Hope, a mysterious station that broadcasts vital information about surviving in a blighted world. But when a mad prophet and his army of fanatics march out of the wildlands on a crusade to purify the land with blood and fire, all three will find their lives intertwining, and changing forever.

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Saturday, 25 January 2014

Tinkering with Radio Hope's blurb (version 3.0)

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